Sunday, October 30, 2016

Photo Essay Revissions

Food is an art and every meal that one eats is a process, consisting of the glamorous presentation and the inevitable destruction of the food. The process of eating food includes many varying emotions, such as happniess and excitment when eating the food and contentness when full. First, the menu is presented and the meal to be eaten must be chosen. Next, the food is served, in this instance an array of pastries was served for Afternoon Tea. The pastries, such as cupcakes and macaroons, were arranged in a beautiful manner, making the guest not want to disrupt the array of pastries. Up to this point the emotions associated with the meal are upwards trending, as the person is waiting for the meal to come. Once the meal comes, the upwards trend reaches its climax as the food enters the person’s mouth. The step before this, however, is the waitress happily bringing the food and explaining each pastry in mouth-watering detail to the guests at the table. This intermediary step between ordering and consuming the food includes vivid thought in the guests’ mind of the time, detail, and thought that the chef must have put in to create the arrangement of pastries. Finally, once the meal is eaten, the eye-catching food is destroyed in an instant. This is portrayed in the final photo.
#afternoontea #fancy #beautiful #tea #hungry
#dessert #pastry #waitress #mouthwatering #yum #appetizing
#destruction #full #broken #naptime

1 comment:

  1. Grade breakdown for revision:

    4/4 for intro: You do a better job of centering "emotions." However, I am still unsure if "upwards trending" is the best word choice/phrasing.

    3/3 for photos

    3/3 for hashtags

    Revised Total: 10/10
    Averaged Total: 9.25/10
    Averaged Letter Grade: A-

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